Monday, August 5, 2013

The hidden school

You are the criminal!

Chapter 1

 1931.5.27 Monday, a police officer came to meet Mr.Alexander the Detective. The police officer was pleased to investigate the mysterious case. He said that all of the detectives who tried to solve this case were dead. Mr. Alexander said this case will be fun, and told him about the case. The police officer said that it was a kidnapping case of a girl named Angelina. So Mr. Alexander thought it was an interesting case and went to investigate the case.
Chapter 2
         
 He arrived at the place where the case happened. He stopped there and made a hole. The police officer didn't understand it. But Mr. Alexander knew that the criminals will come back to the place where they committed the crime. He waited for 7 days. When Mr. Alexander was trying to leave, there was a sound. Mr. Alexander quickly hided. Then there came out a person. He was like in his 20s. When Mr. Alexander looked at him, he was wearing a very expensive coat and he didn't seem out like a criminal. But, Mr. Alexander thought strange, so he ran and grabbed his cloth but that criminal took off his coat and ran away, but Mr. Alexander had a great evidence. 
Chapter 3

      Mr. Alexander came back home and estimated the coat. But surprisingly there was no finger prints on the coat. So Mr. Alexander needed to find evidence with his foot print and his clothes. Mr. Alexander saw the coat and he saw that it was an extremely expensive one. So Mr. Alexander could know that the criminal was very rich. Also, there were many white powders on his foot prints.  And then he noticed that it was a chalk powder! So he started to think about it. 'If he is in the school..... I think there will be no one in school. So the school where he hid himself is a abolished school! Also he ran away fast so he may be hiding in an nearby abolished school!' So he started researching about it. But there was no result of such a school. But Mr. Alexander was keen. So he researched all of the abolished streets. There was an abolish school on an abolished street! He thought 'Got Cha!' and he called the police officer to come.

Chapter 4

 They went inside the abolished school together. The police was holding a gun and Mr. Alexander was holding a whip. They went into the class room. There was Angelina but there were the foot steps sound so they hided. When the criminal came inside, the police officer tried to shoot him but suddenly there was a gun shoot and police officer was dead. The criminal came to Mr.Alexander, and tried to shoot him but Mr. Alexander's whip was faster. The criminal dropped the gun and Alexander lay down the criminal. And Alexander arrested him, rescued Angelina, and took the criminal to the mock trial. Mr. Alexander was the lawyer of the government. By severe competition, the judge gave the criminal "The Death Penalty." 

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1 comment:

  1. It reminds me of BBC Sherlock Holmes. Maybe it is because of the pictures you used. I enjoyed reading your story!

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